Mashi Pishi had shrieked in protest, when Baba had put little Tuntuni, in the arms of Bishu when he stood in one corner of the room, trembling like a leaf. “She’s yours too” Baba had said…and Bishu had looked up at Baba , his face shining like a thousand bulbs…he was in love again…
But Bishu a.k.a Bishsheshwar was not always like this. He was the tallest , strongest and sharpest boy in Class long before health drinks came into vogue. He was Baba’s best friend in school. They were inseparable. Hedmastermoshai always called them his manikjod…his two jewels. But Baba always credited Bishu. “He was the more intelligent one and would not hear of it if i felt lazy and did not want to complete my lessons. He would finish homework in a jiffy and would keep guard till I finished my own!” Baba said.
Yet fate had something else in store for Bishu. Bishu was only a small boy when his father had passed away, leaving Bishu to his mother’s care. To Bishu, his mother meant the world. He could not bear the thought of anything happening to his mother. No one knows what had really happened on that ill fated day. All they saw was a full grown man lying in a pool of blood and Bishu clutching on to his mother’s lifeless body. They said Bishu slit the man’s throat, with the sickle that lay at the entrance of his home. But no one knew for sure. That was the day, when Bishu stepped into some other world.
Baba stayed by his side, and Bishu became a part of his own family.
When Maa came home, Bishu stayed up all night to paint a lovely portrait of her’s, that till date adorns her bedroom wall. Maa had no problem with Bishu around the house. But Mashi Pishi would always complain. They admonished Bishu, shooed him away, when he came to Maa, like a little child asking for food . They told Maa to be careful, of the “batty creature” but Maa being Maa had just smiled. She knew better. She cared for Bishu as one does for a little boy.
When Tuntuni came home, a little pink bundle of joy, Maa’s eyes had searched out for Bishu. Bishu had told her that Tuntuni would come . Maa Baba, the brand new parents took Tuntuni upstairs, while Mashi Pishi made a big din and blew the conch shell and distributed sweets. But Bishu usually the first to participate in any din of any sort, stood in one corner craning over everyone nervously twitching his palms to get one look of Tuntuni. But he couldn’t. Mashi pishi made sure of that.
Baba had insisted that Bishu be a part of the rituals when Tuntuni’s annaprashan (rice ceremony) began. Mashi Pishi’s protests were silenced when Baba gave them one stern look. And Bishu had cradled Tuntuni in his arms. Tuntuni had nestled close to his chest and smiled her toothless grin. Bishu and Tuntuni were best friends from that day on.
Bishu would cry if Tuntuni ever got the slightest fever or so much as let out a tiny sneeze. Maa always said it was more difficult to calm down an anxious Bishu than to look after Tuntuni if she ever fell sick, like little babies do. He would stand at her bedside and talk to her, telling her stories, singing her lullabies till Tuntuni fell asleep.
Bishu was Tuntuni’s playmate. They played everything from hide and seek to ranna bati together. And when she was tired, she would nestle up to him and say “ Tell me a story Bishu.” To Tuntuni, Bishu was a story jukebox, he even smelt like the old warm books of Dadu’s s study. Sometimes when Tuntuni walked into Dadu’s study she would look up in amazement at all the books that adorned the study of the walls…”You remember every story in every book?” she would ask Bishu…and Bishu would say “ Why yes! Of course…I sleep in one book everyday…didn’t you know?” and both would break into an uproarious laughter.
Bishu told her tales of many a lands. From Hanuman’s tales of bravado to the beautiful princess Anastasia of the west. Stories flew past little Tuntuni eyes. She no longer knew fact from fiction, Bishu had created for her a world in which she could create her own characters, who laughed, sang and danced with her. Bishu took her to the pirate ship, where they would hide in the dock, or sip lemonade with the Famous five or go on a secret mission to Mt Kilimanajro.
One day when the cat came to Tuntuni’s nest, Tuntuni no longer bowed in reverence to the cat. Instead, she called him names and flew away with her little ones in tow, while the naughty cat kept fuming in vain! At the end of the story Bishu would said “Tuntuni pakhi ude gelo! Hulo bababaji jole molo!” (Clever Tuntuni flew away and Hulo was left high and dry). Tuntuni would clap her hands in glee, everytime she heard the story and Bishu would laugh…
The day she left her father’s home Tuntuni wept as Maa Baba escorted her to her carriage as Bishi had told her would sweep her away. The wedding was just like he had told her, that was of princesses. Her prince would love her too and they would live happily ever after, but Tuntuni knew Bishu would no longer be a part of her life as she knew it….she wept inconsolably when Bishu came to bid her goodbye….For once he was not the one crying.
Mashi Pishi were at it again..making snide remarks but both Bishu and Tuntuni couldn’t care less as they held on to each other. It was as if they knew it was their last ever meeting. “”Tuntuni pakhi ude gelo….” He had said as she left…..she looked back…from the car…..and it swished past her childhood home…. She knew Bishu would sit up there on the doorstep till daybreak, till all the din subsided.
Bishu would not come onto the phone when Tuntuni called back home. Baba would tell her that he sang and wandered aimlessly and got shooed away by mashi pishi, but he would still look at Tuntuni’s things for hours at end and stare into the space. He slept in Dadu’s study sometimes as he had done when Tuntuni was young.
Yesterday Baba called. When Tuntuni was working on a story of the real world, Bishu had died, peacefully in his sleep. Would Tuntuni come home Baba had asked?
Tuntuni had paused … a thousand images of childhood flew past her eyes as if in a black and white montage….before Baba asked again…. “No” she answered with a smile in her lips and a tear in her eye. “Bishu cannot die Baba. He’s just asleep in one the many book’sin dadu’s study.” She said. The phone went dead at the other end….
Tuntuni went back to her storytelling…of the real world…of real things….
11 comments:
oshadharon. is this fiction or has shades of real life in it? tui tuntuni? please write more babe. bhishon bhalo laaglo. so many of my own stores flashed...so many of those images resonated with me too.
v v nice... u really are a good story teller :)
thanks apus and sims....this is pure fiction..but it definitely has shades of my life...
khub sundor hoyechee re.. I really admire your various styles of writing.. eekdike tui stocks, bonds, finance er moton jinish niye likchis aar onno dike you can pen down such sensitive thoughts. Amazing!!! You are indeed a versatile writer...
very Beautiful... didnt want it to end.... khub bhalo... :)
oye, here: http://www.butkintuparantu.com/2009/09/honest-so-they-say.html
I'm crying...I'm actually sitting here and typing out these words, sobbing my eyes out!
This was beautiful!
Great yaar !!!!the story was sooo touching !!!ishhhhh too gud ....
it's too big but tuntuni stories are comedy
Brilliant....an intricate weaving....keep on writing dear...
Brilliant....an intricate weaving....keep on writing dear...
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